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Welcome to my blog!
I am excited to show you my blog! On my blog, you will see three of my project essays that I did in ENG107 class with Dr. Fazel. Feel free to post me comments and leave suggestions from you!
This subheading named "Justine's world" is my feeling of my first digication portfolio. I am now showing my small world to you:) This picture was taken by my friend Jiahui Zhao, hope you like it!
Wish you enjoy:)
DRAFT: This module has unpublished changes.
13. Leqi Zhang
1. I think the works cited tab should be the last tab.
2. The video should also have an English caption.
3. You might include some of your own experience about Lee Minhao in your project 3 essay.
04/20/15, 03:24 pm
12. Leqi Zhang
I thing you essay is too long for people to read, may be you can narrow your information.
04/13/15, 03:05 pm
11. Yang Feng
You do have a good presentation! But I have a question that what sources you use in your project three, can you show us your work cited?
04/13/15, 03:03 pm
10. Yifei Lian
Hi, Justine. I really like your presentation. In your presentation, I find out why he is so popular and I want to know more about him after class.
04/13/15, 03:03 pm
9. Xusheng Pang
Your presentation is detailed although you have passed a little time. Your do a lot work on decorating your blog and write your project three draft. In your presentation, you explain your topic and give a example for us.
04/13/15, 03:03 pm
8. Nur Afini Ahmad Afandi
I think you can separate you paragraphs into two, because it is too long. It is easier for the readers to read if you separate into shorter paragraphs. I like your blog.
04/13/15, 03:03 pm
7. Renjie Li
Your idea is great. It shows me a fan about a star. Why you want to be a fan about him?
04/13/15, 03:02 pm
6. Ruoxi Zhao
I think you may cut down your body paragraph, it's a little bit long.
04/13/15, 03:02 pm
5. Weiyao Zhang
You may add more your own reflections or feelings.
04/13/15, 03:02 pm
4. Ziyi Liu
I think you did a good job, you are very clearly about your organization of your essay. You also talked about Chinese fans, I think this is a very good examples to show the star is transnational. You are very detailed about your essay. Good! I like your work!
04/13/15, 03:02 pm
3. Jiayi Lu
You have a great deal of pages, very careful. what you want to change about your personal files in your presentation? But as I can see you are very familiar with your favorite Korean's actor MinhaoLi
04/13/15, 03:01 pm
2. Mohammad Al-Roumi
great choice of photo and video's but they need titles
04/13/15, 03:01 pm
1. Valerie Fazel
Dr. Fazel was here
04/06/15, 02:02 am